(The following story was dictated to me by my five-year-old daughter, Katlyn who is a huge Young Rider fan and a budding fanfic author. Her favorite riders are Lou and Jimmy. She asked if I would send this in to the Ranch for her. Hope you like it…)

Louise went out to get the mail Christmas Eve.

When she looked in the mail, there was a letter from Jimmy. When she read it, Jimmy had wrote, “I may be a little late for Christmas because I am getting you a present.

Then she went into the kitchen to bake a nice turkey.

When Jimmy arrived, Lou looked into the living room their daughter was hugging his legs because she couldn’t reach him.

Lou called him into the kitchen. Looking on the table he saw a big Christmas dinner.

When the others arrived they put the presents under the tree.

Jimmy called out, “Let’s eat!”

The others said “Wow,” when they saw the huge turkey Lou cooked.

Lou said, “After we eat we are going to open up the presents.”

After they ate, they hurried into the living room.

They all sat down as Jimmy gave Lou her present.

When she unwrapped it, she couldn’t find the words to say how much she liked her earrings and necklace so she hugged him.

The End

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